Sunday, January 18, 2015
SOL#9
Swhoosh Swhoosh
Flip Click Flip Click
I SEE IT! The valley. The valley were we get to rest and have fun!
I strap off my snowshoes and get up...
I loose my footing and sink. Down down down to my waist.
I crawl out and try to stand back up
but I sink Down down down to my waist
I crawl out and roll
Roll
Roll
and then stand up.
but I sink
Down
Down
Down
I try to Crawl
It works! It does!
I crawl
crawl
Crawl
And sink again
I try again
I sink again
Down
Down
Down
Down
And then once I finally have sunk and rolled and crawled across this crazy tundra do I realize that snowshoes are a miracle and were worth feeling like a duck.
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I loved your descriptions of sinking in the snow, I also really like how you orientates you blog, it was a really unique idea
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DeleteHa ha! That was so funny! Snowshoes may make you feel like a duck, but like you said it is better then sinking in. I like how she you wrote down, you made it go down.
ReplyDeleteWOW the formatting is so cool! the shoes totally make you feel like a duck :P
ReplyDeleteI like the way your sol was written like a poem.
ReplyDeleteI love that you didn't stay aligned to the left. you mixed it up. I also like the ending.
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