Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Haikus

The caterpillar
Climbed up the rather small branches
Getting ready to fly

The butterfly climbs
Up the branches ready to fly
Up and up and up

Bright vibrant colors shine
On the wings of this creature
Who flies with a smile

4 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 14, 2015 at 4:52 PM

    This is a very nice poem, I like it! I like how you made the first two poems about the stages of a butterfly, nice work!

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  2. UnknownApril 14, 2015 at 6:32 PM

    I love all of the poems, especially the second one. Nice job! I also love the description of flying with a smile. :)

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  3. UnknownApril 15, 2015 at 1:57 PM

    These are cool. they are the morphing of a butterfly. they are all different, but all connect.

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  4. AnonymousApril 16, 2015 at 9:07 AM

    What a beautiful progression through the poem from the caterpillar to the butterfly!

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