I feel my feet lift
And bound,
There is no
Gravity.
What a great feeling
To see the
Earth and the
Stars as a whole.
To see the
Whole world
While putting
A flag
In the grey
Dust.
What a great feeling
To be able to just
Lift your feet
And jump.
It feels like you are flying.
What a great feeling to
Put a flag
In the ground,
But this ground is
Untouched.
There is no wind.
Our footprints will be
There,
Sitting there
Forever.
What a great feeling,
but yet so scary to see
your planet so, so far away.
I wonder...
Will I make it home?
There is worries,
But I feel alive.
This is ASWOME! I really like it!
ReplyDeleteI like the repletion of "what a great feeling," it ties the whole thing together very nicely.
ReplyDeleteis it a coincidence that we both wrote stuff about men on the moon? I really like "Our footprints will be
ReplyDeleteThere, Sitting there Forever." it leaves a good image in my head.
I love the moon. It's cool that we have one. I think the flag is bleached from the environment now which is really cool.
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